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#1 davidsevern

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Posted 06 September 2011 - 09:33 PM

I wish I would stop this,
measuring my words to you on the screen,
and talk as freely,
as confidently,
and brightly ,
as all the beautiful cells,
in your body.

You know,
I had this poem out in pieces on the floor,
but after everything,
I typed,
and deleted,
and typed,
it really didn’t need to be that long at all.

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Posted 06 September 2011 - 10:26 PM

Like the image of spreading the pieces out on the floor like a jigsaw

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Posted 17 November 2011 - 11:29 PM

I love this.. very good
Better to live one day as a tiger than a hundred as a sheep





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