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[Lucinda]

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we pretty day shame
old
old
same same

the rivers in
love with
the
witch

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[James Lee]

I didn't like this
why have a wich
why love

bum
bum

pick up hair and brush
though I didn't like this either

[Lucinda]

its a shame you didnt like it James but thank you for the poem back. i like the bum bum bit.