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#1 Lucinda

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Posted 08 August 2012 - 05:21 PM

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grace
flow
bounce
groove

rhythm
soul
verve

spirit
style
let
it
slide

god and
rocknroll


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#2 RebelRhymes

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Posted 08 August 2012 - 10:14 PM

Short but sweet Lucinda, nice meter & timing in this one. Keep em' coming. R.
"I'm not a number I'm a free man, Live my life where I want to
You'd better scratch me from your black book, Cause' I'll run rings around you"

'The Prisoner'

Iron Maiden 'The Number of the Beast'
S.Harris / A.Smith 1982





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